HELP MACBETH PAPER due tom!!...IS THIS A CLEAR or GOOD THESIS STATEMENT?

Fear was the major motivating factor for Macbeth’s actions and led to his downfall


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Fear was the major motivating factor in the play Macbeth


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both are okay? if not any suggestions please thanks :)HELP MACBETH PAPER due tom!!...IS THIS A CLEAR or GOOD THESIS STATEMENT?
Fear proved a cataclysmic force in the events leading up to Macbeth's slow self-destruction in the events which lead, ultimately, to his demise.





Fear and power proved to be the driving force behind Macbeth's rapid decent into ruin.





In ';Macbeth'; playwright William Shakespeare teaches one of the destructive forces of power hunger and fear; both of which play key roles in the events leading up to the conflicted protagonist, MacBeth's demise.HELP MACBETH PAPER due tom!!...IS THIS A CLEAR or GOOD THESIS STATEMENT?
Both are great. The 1st one is the strongest one but the 2nd one is fine!!! Well done
Your first one is solid and really captures the point. I would refine it by saying: ';Fear was the primary motivating factor behind Macbeth's actions, and it was also what ultimately led to his downfall.';





By the way, what school are you going to that has classes during the holidays?





Good luck :)
both sound gd to me
i like the first one